How to write your first draft faster? Putting a beloved writing tip to the test!

I am a slow writer. I overthink, I over babble, I over edit. Since I decided to make a living as an traditionnaly publsihed author, I started relentlessly searching for tips and tricks to improve, well, everything about my writing. From the routine and character building to the writing pace. Everything. That is exactly what … Continuer la lecture de « How to write your first draft faster? Putting a beloved writing tip to the test! »

I am a slow writer.

I overthink, I over babble, I over edit.

Since I decided to make a living as an traditionnaly publsihed author, I started relentlessly searching for tips and tricks to improve, well, everything about my writing. From the routine and character building to the writing pace. Everything.

That is exactly what I found: every piece of advice every good willed (well, money willed too, let’s be honest here) writer can cook up about writing.

What’s a writer to do with all those tips ?

So many tips, so little time

First, I go by the zero bashing rule. I am not here to judge on condemn anybody who’s trying her or his best to help others out there.

Soon, I started to feel like a foolish unproductive amateur, although I’ve had creative writing classes in University; and I’ve been writing for twenty years; and I’ve actually started my own semi-successful little blogging in-French-an-in-English business.

Among other things, I started to think I needed to learn how to write faster if I ever wanted even a mere chance at getting traditionally published.

I stopped right there and I took a few moments to think things over.

Peer pressure, sort of

Why did I felt pressured by a bunch of people I’ve never met, to do things this-or-that way in order to achieve master the art of being a successful writing career?

Mostly because I want this to work sooo badly. I want to be able to tell my kid you can make your dream come true.

That being said, I was not going to pay hundreds of dollars to be taught how to write an cheap e-book repeating the same s***, to illustrated what I found on some blogs (I do not intend to attack anyone, you gals and guys are darn aloud to earn a living), for the sake of giving it away in order to build an audience for my own author platform. Its just not me.

That being said, I figured that some of those free tips I found might be worth a try anyway.

I choose three tips among the many, many, many writing tips about writing your first draft out there. And I put them to the test!

Carve time

Yeah, I know. How can that one event qualified as a tip, I asked myself every time I stumbled upon it. I put it to the test anyway, since it was everywhere and my writing process was still on the slow side of things.

Those great bloggers say to schedule time for writing, commit to it for at least 21 days and cut back your candy crushing time (that last one is from yours truly).

In short: clear distractions, put the kids to bed and the fiancé in front of a couple of new comic books, be consistent.

Consistency was, with self-doubt and a ton of other little icky things, a major problem for me.

I followed the obvious tip and, honestly, I wrote 23 000 words within 3 weeks. Never before, and I have been writing for 20 years, have I wrote that many words so fast.

Now, I still get up all the time to get more hot water for the tea (I truly dislike coffee, at all times, in all forms), but, I sat my butt back down on that chair and go back to it.

Here’s the authors and bloggers who helped me accomplish that :

Set realistic goals

I can do it. I also wanted to write a novel in thirty days. I wanted in.

So, I wrote a novel in a month. 50 000 words in thirty days. I did it ! Dirty little secret thought: I rewrote the thing for the next year and a half. I got up to 52 000 words and except for the names of the characters, none of those first 50 000 words written in 30 days survived.

Nevertheless, I kept coming back with unrealistic writing goals that only left me discouraged or disappointed or candy crushing my writing sorrows to oblivion.

Not healthy.

Setting realistic goals, like take a piece of paper and write them down, helped me tremendously. I was going to write 1000 words 5 night a week, get myself writing time two out of four Saturdays mornings and finish a tween novel in three months.

The first thing you know, I am ahead of schedule and I feel super proud, mainly because I set myself up to a goal way below of what I can do. I feel like I beat my highest score almost every day. Plus, I have so much more fun writing this story!

That tip helped me the most, by far.

Here’s the links to the posts that really helped:

Inner editor OFF

More then once, I spent an entire hour on ONE paragraph, or edit a chapter way to early in the process.

Something had to be done. I still struggle, but shutting off my inner editor made me able to write 23 000 words in three weeks.

I did some editing since a character got 75% deleted, some scenes changed and other rippling effects had to be delt with so the story would still make sense.

Still, by pushing through my urge to rethink everything on the spot instead of keep on writing that chapter, I got more writing done. And good writing too.

I tend to over-doubt myself, I guess. Forcing my inner editor to calm the heck down is a pretty good tip to write anything faster, truth to be told.

I edit later. The writing is improving because of it, I feel. It’s all good.

Here’s the best post about that tip:

Writing tips to the test, part two

I planned to finish the current first draft by March 31. I let you know if I was able to keep the tips going and what I found most relevant in the long run.

Let me know what you think about this writing tips test!

How to trash your first draft without crying your heart out

At University, I had my first creative writing class. Many would follow, but in the first one, I learned one precious tip.

The teacher, a best-selling author who happened to wrote really good novels, sparked a passionate debate when he shared that tip with the whole class.

 » Work hard on your first draft, take your time, do your best and when you’re done, trash it. »

Even I, who was sold on every word the teacher said, flinch a bit. You mean… I have to… trash… the manuscript I have been working on for the past two years of my life (when you’re twenty years old, two years seems the equivalent of two decades).

Why is it essential to trash your first draft

That was the question in every student’s eyes. One spoke first

Why, cried, utterly hurt, one of the student, an artist-to-the-core type of writer.

The kind that made feel like a complete poodle s**t because I was writing fantasy or kid’s novel. It was all in their amused look and condescending grin.

She was in a total disarray. I could she possibly listen to the advice of a best-selling author when she, she of all people, poured her entire being into her words?

He could have said what many other writers and bloggers, blessed with a similar opinion on the first draft matter, are saying right now:

« Your first draft is c**p ».

Now, a good creative teacher must be, before being an excellent writer herself/himself, a diplomat.

With diplomacy, he explained the why.

Take comfort, little heart

Ready to meet his argument with all her strength, the artist-to-the-core writer mastered the urged of not let him speak



In the first draft, he said (more or less, its been a while) you’re meeting new people, their friends and family, for the very first time. 
 
The second time around, you know your characters, you know their surroundings, you can push your plot even further. 
 
You will write a better novel the second time around. Promess. 

 
The artist-to-the-core did not concur. Followed a somewhat long exposé about artistic differences, an interesting discussion I didn’t take part in. I was there to write, not to quieveled on details. 
 
I went home that night with a heavy heart. Without thinking too much about, I trashed my beloved manuscript and went to bed, feeling like I would never get published, I would never finished the work, I would never be taken seriously. 
 
Take comfort, the first time is the hardest.
 
If you are completely new at this, rejoice ! You are prepared to face the inevitable. 
 
It’s the big secret behind the idea: understand why you have to trash your first draft and prepare yourself. 
 

Drafts Cheating 

Of course I cheated the first time ! I was in my 20’s. It was my first almost completed manuscript. Lots of emotion attached to it. 

I kept the first chapter, started from there. Turns out I had to rewrite the first chapter at the end, because it didn’t make sense anymore. 

I cheated again a couple of times, even recently. I still regret it.

The novel is a mess, there’s scenes that don’t make any sense anymore hiding within the new chapters.

Instead of getting the words out, I spent way too much time editing and getting the timeline back to consistent, clear, happy timeline.

Do as your heart tells you, but once you understand that trashing your first will transform your novel into a better novel, go all the way. 

After how many drafts you can send your manuscript to an agent/publisher ? 

That is a story for another time. 

 

What do you think of the whole trashing your first draft business ? I’m curious to see on which « side » you’re on !

How to write a best-selling novel : the beautiful harsh thruth

In this post, we tackle the oh! so promising  »how to write a bestselling novel » articles you can fin out there. And we tell the truth about it. 

Being a writer is the perfect job.

You learn all the time, you read all the time and, in my case anyway, you drink tea all the time.

Lately, I have been searching back and forth the entire Web universe, looking for the best way to start off an author platform, since I’m almost done writing yet an another draft of the novel I’ve been trying to get published this past five years.

While doing that, I stumbled across so many  »how to’s » articles, it was overwhelming.

The vast majority of those  »how to’s » were super useful (I talked about the best tips about writing I found in a other post).

However, some  »how to’s » simply bugged me so much that I thought it was time to set the record straight.

In this post, we tackle the oh so promising  »how to write a bestselling novel ». And we tell the truth about it.

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