Tested Writing Tip: How to make peace with adverbs

One night, the teacher in our creative writing class said: adverbs are bad.
I felt called out, probably like most of the others 20 years old students there.

One night, the teacher in our creative writing class said: adverbs are bad.

I felt called out, probably like most of the others 20 years old students there.

I was (still am) very fond of adverbs. I loved their rhythm, the way they would make emotions, places, moments clearer.

That being said, I was more eager to become a better writer than to fight for adverbs. And since, according to my teacher, a great open-minded author, relying on adverbs was a clear sign of lazy, unimaginative writing, I promptly banned them.

For years, I avoided them whenever possible, and felt like a bad writer whenever I was using them.

Over the years, I learned how to make peace with adverbs. I used them less for sure. And when I do use them, I go through these checkpoints:

  • Is it making things clearer or confusing?
  • Is the sentence flows nicely?
  • Is the adverbs necessary here?

When in doubt, I read the sentence out loud. Tell you the truth, I often read out loud, just to see if I trip on words or need to take a breath in the middle of a sentence (a clear sign that there’s a punctuation problem somewhere, or that the sentence is way too long).

So there it is, short and sweet, my tested writing tip on how to make peace with adverbs.

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Finding Your Writing Voice: The Pastiche Writing Tip

It is an exercise to help you find your OWN writing voice, not an invitation to plagiarism!!!

That one comes from the creative writing class I took way back then, some twenty years ago, oh dear oh dear.

Still, its a valid writing tip that helps me a lot, especially when I feel a writing block lurking around.

How it works

Here’s the edited definition for writers: a literary piece consisting wholly of borrowed techniques.

You copy the writing style of a other writer, in order to understand how they use words, grammar, how they described, how they develop characters.

VERY IMPORTANT: It is an exercise to help you find your OWN writing voice, not an invitation to plagiarism!!!

It works like this: you pick 3 to 5 novels, from different authors from different eras, and more importantly, different genre.

Choose a novel from Agota Kristoff, Jacques Poulin, Colette, Isaac Asimov and Alessandro Barrico, for exemple.

It will help if you read the whole book before selecting a specific scene, but you can also just select a scene.

After reading the selected scene thoroughly, you write a new story using the style and voice of the author.

Simple enough, but I found it really helps me clear my mind and narrow down my own writing voice, while picking up some great writing techniques.

Writing a pastiche of J.D. Sallinger twenty years ago left me, to this day, with a different perspective on rhythm.

I hope this writing tip will help.

Now, this wanna-be traditionally published author is going back to the mid-point of her current WIP.

Until next time!

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1 tip and no pain to ease your way back into your writing routine

The first week back to work, I completely forgot about that good old tip of mine, which I feel like is probably everybody’s tip to ease their way back to work.

Yeah.

Summer vacations are over. Definitely over.

Work is back. Dozen of emails, yet zero prospect. Translation: oh-so-much things to do, oh-so-much queries to send.

Plus, we’re surrounded by the buzzing sound of debut novels. When I was working in the bookstore business, I was looking forward to that time of the year.

Now, I find the amount of debut novels… well, overwhelming to say the least. How on earth my novel, if it ever get traditionally published, or self-published even, will do out and about among so many new titles, so many many, goods books?

With that in mind, getting back to my writing routine was surprisingly difficult. Creative writing is my refuge, my comfort zone. And yet, words were lost and AuthorTube videos over-consumed.

Nothing that a good tip, tested many times, couldn’t fix thought!

Same spot, same time, but with a twist

I love a good work routine.

Precision: I love my work routine. I need to decide the « when’s » of my day. When to eat, when to take a break, when to query clients, etc…

Put me in any kind of desk job 9 to 5, with judgy co-workers and a snobby boss, and you’ll soon see me turned into a yelling-disgusted-with-human-kind monster, who always reads during her lunch hour, keep as much as possible to itself and always, always, always skip the Xmas party.

Nevertheless, going back to a work routine can be challenging, especially you are as lazy as I am and there’s a ton of revision, editing, re-writing to be done before being able to move on to the new exciting writing project.

Therefore, before even starting to work, I would treat myself with a « not every day because a bit expansive tea ». Or I would buy a new book before starting to work. Or I would get myself a real good Monday-doesn’t-have-to-be-horrible breakfast. Or, you get the idea!

Funny enough, the first week back to work, I completely forgot that I used to do that: rewarding myself with stuff that I love.

This Monday, my pre-reward for finishing writing an article for this blog, which I have been procrastinating with for weeks, was a big bowl of frozen yogurt, swimming in a sea of fudge and brownies bits.

Just one big bowl.

I swear.

Until next time!

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